I feel the repeat of 'Insanity reins your mind / Your blind and numb' is unnecessary and doesn't add anything to the piece. Perhaps consider removing it to create a more controlled piece.
'Death is crazy' This little line caught my attention but its simplicity. Good work.
I feel the repeat of 'Insanity reins your mind / Your blind and numb' is unnecessary and doesn't add anything to the piece. Perhaps consider removing it to create a more controlled piece.
'Death is crazy' This little line caught my attention but its simplicity. Good work.